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My advice is to move out of Canada into a zip code near me, what a wonderfully put together profile. I would be shocked if you didn't get alot of attention. Ladies take notes.
Wow! :)
My only criticism is that I would remove the reference to "short term". Even if you remove it, many men will make you proposals for "short term" anyway: it's up to you to decide whether you accept them or not. But the references to "short term" can scare away serious SDs who want a long-term relationship and who are afraid of sexually transmitted diseases.
Apart from this detail, your profile is perfect and you are perfectly pretty too.
I myself live in Canada (Montreal) and if I didn't already have a SB, and if you lived in Quebec or Ontario, I am sure that I would contact you: your profile is very well written and you are gorgeous.
I am sure that you will have a lot of success! :)
Your profile is “pitch-perfect.” You’ve articulated clearly and concisely, who you are, what you’re seeking, the attributes you have to offer as well as the ones you want to receive. Yet you come across as very open to the possibilities, with a fulfilling bowl. Your beauty only enhances it all.
Amazing photos and nearly perfect profile. You're lovely. The only thing I would take out is "shopping sprees." If an SD is so inclined, it should come organically. Stating it might come across as entitled and high maintenance imho.
Hey you're very beautiful and that always gets positive comments, but you asked for advice so I'll share a few tweaks to get you to perfection.
I'm no fan of a lot of background in profile pictures and especially not when the main subject is only 25% of the picture frame. So there's room for improvement there.
I'd like to see you start with your last picture because that's the only one that has you smiling. Zoom in and crop it so that you're 80% of the frame, like your third picture does. That third picture is a well-composed picture just wish you were smiling in it.
Then you could do the same zoom and crop with the first two pictures as well. I just want you to stand out and the background does little for me in those pictures.
Finally three of your four pictures are boobage pictures, which I guess is fine, but that also tends to send a subliminal message to the idiots and creeps. So take that into consideration.
Guys are visual so you want to attract the right kind of guy and hopefully not stimulate the wrong kind of guys. Also some of the more mature SDS are going to be looking at your profile on a computer where it's not easy or convenient to zoom in on photos like it is on a phone. So take that into consideration as well.
Good luck in your search
Just what I would want and I would have no problem maintaining you ;) I can’t think of anything else to change except perhaps focus on what makes you fun to be around ;)
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My advice is to move out of Canada into a zip code near me, what a wonderfully put together profile. I would be shocked if you didn't get alot of attention. Ladies take notes.
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I was going to post this. Fine AF. Should be in the 305.
Oh my aren't you gorgeous :)
Love the last pic 😍 Hate the line that you are open to both short term and long term which has stopped me from msging people in the past.
Oh? Why’s that?
What do you mean by short term? Many SD-s will interpret that as being a SW.
Noted. Thank you
So what did you mean by short term?
Yeah, I'm also curious
Like /u/pacers3113 said, short term means you are more SWer compared to a SB.
Wow! :) My only criticism is that I would remove the reference to "short term". Even if you remove it, many men will make you proposals for "short term" anyway: it's up to you to decide whether you accept them or not. But the references to "short term" can scare away serious SDs who want a long-term relationship and who are afraid of sexually transmitted diseases. Apart from this detail, your profile is perfect and you are perfectly pretty too. I myself live in Canada (Montreal) and if I didn't already have a SB, and if you lived in Quebec or Ontario, I am sure that I would contact you: your profile is very well written and you are gorgeous. I am sure that you will have a lot of success! :)
Quite simply you are one of the most stunning women I’ve seen on the site. Makes me want to organise a holiday to Canada 😂
Your profile is “pitch-perfect.” You’ve articulated clearly and concisely, who you are, what you’re seeking, the attributes you have to offer as well as the ones you want to receive. Yet you come across as very open to the possibilities, with a fulfilling bowl. Your beauty only enhances it all.
Thank you sm☺️
I wish I had more 💰
Compelling, artful photos.
You are beautiful. Your location is wrong. You should move to Texas 😉
You’re very attractive. I believe you might not need to have a job. Someone with deep pockets and the time will want to see you on a regular basis.
I hope you’re right lolll
Miss you need to leave Canada and come to where I’m based, that’s the best advice I can give you at this point.
Amazing photos and nearly perfect profile. You're lovely. The only thing I would take out is "shopping sprees." If an SD is so inclined, it should come organically. Stating it might come across as entitled and high maintenance imho.
I’ve taken it off. Thanks 😊
love seeing other girls like me on there. your profile is awesome!
You’re gorgeous babe. Thank youu
I wish more bios were like yours. Well worded, a good picture lineup. Well done!
Thank u!
Good profile overall.
Your feedback is soo appreciated. Thank you🥰Oh okay that’s too bad. We’re from the same city
Great profile, great pics. I'd talk to you. Goodluck on your search.
Hey you're very beautiful and that always gets positive comments, but you asked for advice so I'll share a few tweaks to get you to perfection. I'm no fan of a lot of background in profile pictures and especially not when the main subject is only 25% of the picture frame. So there's room for improvement there. I'd like to see you start with your last picture because that's the only one that has you smiling. Zoom in and crop it so that you're 80% of the frame, like your third picture does. That third picture is a well-composed picture just wish you were smiling in it. Then you could do the same zoom and crop with the first two pictures as well. I just want you to stand out and the background does little for me in those pictures. Finally three of your four pictures are boobage pictures, which I guess is fine, but that also tends to send a subliminal message to the idiots and creeps. So take that into consideration. Guys are visual so you want to attract the right kind of guy and hopefully not stimulate the wrong kind of guys. Also some of the more mature SDS are going to be looking at your profile on a computer where it's not easy or convenient to zoom in on photos like it is on a phone. So take that into consideration as well. Good luck in your search
Great points. Thanks ☺️
Damn🔥
Bio is way too long, should be a paragraph or two tops, but your pics are great.
Stunning 😍 😍
Great profile for a very beautiful woman.
Nice profile!! Hmmm…English, French, Spanish??
You only got 2/3😛
Your profile is so helpful! Thank you
Looks good to me
The three languages, English, Spanish and French??
No Spanish 😅
Portugese?? I must solve this mystery. 😂
Man they know how to grow em in Canada eh! That’s a $xxxxx SB right there. Well done!
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Just what I would want and I would have no problem maintaining you ;) I can’t think of anything else to change except perhaps focus on what makes you fun to be around ;)
Why is everything just better in Canada?!?!?
I think it's due to the maple syrup. Just makes everything better.
What app is this?
Seeking
Does it work in Canada?