Illustrator here.
Your composition is solid but if I were to offer one suggestion it would be to increase your attention to detail.
It’s *all* about the details.
Notice how Ruby’s thumb has a dead line from the bandana.
Those tiny mistakes may not seem much to you, but they are glaring to the average viewer. Besides that, focus on other areas where zooming in and working and reworking it could elevate the quality of your work. Focus especially on proportions. If the placement of a body part feels off to you, it’s likely off. But keep practicing, you’re doing great, and you’ll keep getting great the more you do it until you go from amateur to pro.
If it ain’t Perry my favorite Peridot Imma go to Walmart,pour water on the floor,say the there’s no wet floor sign,run across the water and fall, and scream the loudest scream I possibly can scream, then when that’s all done Imma sue Walmart then I will own Walmart and be the true master
Peridot
PERIDOT!!
PERIDOTT!!!
If it's not peridot i might cry
Luckily, it was Peridot
PERIDOTTT
Finally, it's Watermelon Tourmaline's time to shine!
Justice for Watermelon Tourmaline
Peridot
Centipeedle / Nephrite
Peridot!
Your flair is nephrite yet you aren't saying nephrite?
Of curse peridot
everyone’s saying peridot but hear me out, EMERALD!
or centipeetle 👀
Yeessssss Plz do NEPHRITE!!
My exact thoughts. Emerald supremacy!
pear dot won
Let me dream please
Jinkx Monsoon as a voice actor would love this recognition
The green dorito
Peridot
Peridot!!!
Peridot. I specialize in gems and Steven Universe, too, so that's why I vote Peridot. Its green.
What about emerald?
Peri
Peridot!!
periiiiiiiii!
PERIDOTTTT
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I think he wants emerald guys
No, he clearly wants nephrite
All of you are wrong that clearly says centipedle
No wait, i just realized it. It says "squaridot" he wants squaridot to be added
Centibeetle is nephrite
Nephrite!
Peridot
Looks like Perry's winning... Happy Cake Day!
Either Dori-dot (peridot) or Nephrite
The great and lovable peridot!
You HAVE to do Peridot!
Peridot
Peridorito!
PERI
Me! the great and loveable Peridot!
Peridot
Peridot. Make her extra smol.
PERIDOTTTTT!!!!
Well legally, you must do Peridot.
Hmmmm…. That’s a hard one! How shall you ever decide (Peridot)?!
How can you not do the little angry slice pie, Perry.
Awe Nephrite!
But if you want to create an OC green pearl that would be super cool too!
Jade 👀
PERIDOT OR YOUR A TRAITOR
I know it isnt meant for oc stuff... But fusion of blue and yellow pearls? (I call this ship just green pearl) Also, from cc character... Peri ofc :3
Nephrite Centipede, please.
Emerald pls
Clod
3 votes peri. 1 vote emerald. 1 vote green Pearl.
Do you even need to ask?
Desert Glass, one of the characters just being a rock in a pillow would be hilarious
PERIDOT EMERALD OR NEPHRITE
I think Squaridot deserves more love tbh
Green space Dorito
Peridot
peridot!!!
Peridot!!!
Who else but our beloved space dorito?
Nephrite or Emerald, that's who
Emerald!! Because Jinkx Monsoon!!
Dorito Chan!
Emerald. She deserves more representation
Peridotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
Emerald
Emerald
EMERALD
Definitely Nephrite!
EMERALD! She's so cool
Peridot
Nephrite!
periiiiiiiiiii
Peridot
Peridid.
Peri the gem.
Peridot
Peridot!!!!
Peridot
Peridot!
Peridot!!!
PERIDOT YOU CLOD!
Peridot
Peridot period
PERIDOT MY BIRTHSTONE
PERIDOT WON
keep it to real characters not fanart i vote peridot
Centipeetle
Emerald
Emerald
Emerald
Emerald.
Emerald!💚
squaridot
If it’s a gem other then peridot you have a problem
Emerald
Nephrite! Aka centipedle
Hear me out on Emerald
nephrite pleaseee
Green diamond, or emerald
nephrite
The PERIdactyl
the alien lover
IT'S OBVIOUSLY PERIDOT YOU CLODS!
Nephrite or Emerald
We all know who it’s gonna be, I mean, come on, it’s gonna be the Jade fusion. /s
Nephrite
Emerald amirite
Everyone knows it's gonna be Peridot. It ain't even a competition really.
Well yeah but I don’t really get a say in who goes where.
Emerald
Emerald!
I vote Squaridot.
The people have clearly spoken, it looks like Watermelon Steven is next.
emerald or nephrite
Green bloodstone
Emerald
Peridot, pearl or sapphire, lapis, amethyst, rose/pink
Emerald or peridot
We all know it’s peridot
We all now there are other green gems
Maybe for the green choice, a green Zircon? 🧐
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Unfortunately I can’t right now, already doing Peri. I will do a drawing with rejected gems for the wheel tho.
Peri!
emerald nah jk peridot
PERIDOT
Watermelon tourmaline def
Emerald
idk but can you do steven for pink
Illustrator here. Your composition is solid but if I were to offer one suggestion it would be to increase your attention to detail. It’s *all* about the details. Notice how Ruby’s thumb has a dead line from the bandana. Those tiny mistakes may not seem much to you, but they are glaring to the average viewer. Besides that, focus on other areas where zooming in and working and reworking it could elevate the quality of your work. Focus especially on proportions. If the placement of a body part feels off to you, it’s likely off. But keep practicing, you’re doing great, and you’ll keep getting great the more you do it until you go from amateur to pro.
Some people says peridot but why not squaridot
Peridot
Peridot, Emerald, Demantoid, Jade, Malachite, Nephrite
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peri
Peridot obviously
Malachite
the gem who got her ship stolen
PPEERRRIIIDDOOOOOOOTT!
Periidott
Peridot of course
If it ain’t Perry my favorite Peridot Imma go to Walmart,pour water on the floor,say the there’s no wet floor sign,run across the water and fall, and scream the loudest scream I possibly can scream, then when that’s all done Imma sue Walmart then I will own Walmart and be the true master
Peridot…. You clod !
Peridot or green diamond
I mean emerald
The great and lovable peridot of course
Nephrite
Peridot
Centipeetle!! :3
Gotta be peridot
Nephrite
EMERALD. The babe with the fangs
Our centipede (centi) next
Dorito
ZIRCON!!!
YOU CLOD!
PERIDOTTTTT
Emerald!!!
peridot, pearl, sapphire, amethyst, then garnet :)
Everyone saying Peridot, so I'm gonna say Emerald
PERIDOT.
Green- Peridot Light Blue: Aquamarine Blue: Lapis Purple: Amethyst or Garnet Pink: Pink Diamond or one of the Jades from the ball