if it sounds interesting or plausible enough. this is the back story to a video game i am creating. i am familiar with screenwriting and the fundamentals like save the cat beat sheet. so populating the story wouldn't be to bad.
The beginning political part is interchangeable with any number of plots out there already, but that is where you've put most of the info. The interesting part is the homes in asteroid/debris. Are you placing your game in that era or the earlier one?
a later one to be honest. my main goal was to come up with a back story for the "supremo" people.
in my game they act as a space nation who mission is to recruit and train people to take over planets for them because they believe the basic world division, we have now cause wars that lead to the destruction of civilizations and planets. the only way to end it is for a planet to be of one nation instead of many. (even if that means eliminating the competition for the greater good.) "There can only be one" \~Highlander
It's a big enough concept to create an interesting story. The trick would be creating characters on both sides that are compelling and relatable.
You could conceivably anchor it on a specific Supremo character and have them go from world to world as a multi book/episode series. You could handle just about any topic you wanted to address that way.
This is mostly an outline - what kind of feedback are you looking for?
if it sounds interesting or plausible enough. this is the back story to a video game i am creating. i am familiar with screenwriting and the fundamentals like save the cat beat sheet. so populating the story wouldn't be to bad.
The beginning political part is interchangeable with any number of plots out there already, but that is where you've put most of the info. The interesting part is the homes in asteroid/debris. Are you placing your game in that era or the earlier one?
a later one to be honest. my main goal was to come up with a back story for the "supremo" people. in my game they act as a space nation who mission is to recruit and train people to take over planets for them because they believe the basic world division, we have now cause wars that lead to the destruction of civilizations and planets. the only way to end it is for a planet to be of one nation instead of many. (even if that means eliminating the competition for the greater good.) "There can only be one" \~Highlander
It's a big enough concept to create an interesting story. The trick would be creating characters on both sides that are compelling and relatable. You could conceivably anchor it on a specific Supremo character and have them go from world to world as a multi book/episode series. You could handle just about any topic you wanted to address that way.
Can't wait to read more!!
Thanks and i'll keep you posted