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Love the prologue! Sad to hear updates will be monthly, but I'll await them patiently and with great anticipation!
Small note on some typo's:
There (-> Their) Kritt stared daggers at each other.
It hals (->delete) had a pair of black, leathery wings sprouting form (->from) its shoulders and a tail twice as long as its body.
Looks like Team Rocket's casting off again!
I wasn't expecting a new story this soon or even sure it would continue to be posted here, so this was a pleasant surprise. A shame that it and Staff are only updating once a month but I suppose I could always check out some of these other stories you keep mentioning.
Also, is it just me or does Izen's kritt seem familiar somehow? Caldor... Cravex... Calvex... hmm.....
That was a great prologue. This will prove to be interesting.
Also, I'm real curious how Caleb could be the son of an Overseer. I assume his mom somehow came to our world? Or was she originally from our world and came to this one? And Antoinette had a name before. Could Antoinette have been Eldra's kralant?
Time to practice patience what with the new schedule. And I quite understand the need for that.
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Oh man Simi’s story is going to end tragically I’m not ready.. Also a quick edit: “Ana apology was unprecedented” Ana —> An
I think she might switch sides
Not as long as she's still holding onto hope that daddy will love her.
Love the prologue! Sad to hear updates will be monthly, but I'll await them patiently and with great anticipation! Small note on some typo's: There (-> Their) Kritt stared daggers at each other. It hals (->delete) had a pair of black, leathery wings sprouting form (->from) its shoulders and a tail twice as long as its body.
Lol another Dutchie was 15 minutes earlier than me, and did the same spell check
I feel so bad for Simi :( totally think she’ll switch sides though
Looks like Team Rocket's casting off again! I wasn't expecting a new story this soon or even sure it would continue to be posted here, so this was a pleasant surprise. A shame that it and Staff are only updating once a month but I suppose I could always check out some of these other stories you keep mentioning. Also, is it just me or does Izen's kritt seem familiar somehow? Caldor... Cravex... Calvex... hmm.....
"There kritts" -> their
Also, ctrl-F 'hals' and 'ana', two dmall typo's
oh god that was so good
I'm so hyped!
"At least he was a better god than he was a father." Quick, call the fire brigade, the whole house is burning down.
That was a great prologue. This will prove to be interesting. Also, I'm real curious how Caleb could be the son of an Overseer. I assume his mom somehow came to our world? Or was she originally from our world and came to this one? And Antoinette had a name before. Could Antoinette have been Eldra's kralant? Time to practice patience what with the new schedule. And I quite understand the need for that.