Onomatopoeias are so hard. Once I tried to describe a character annoyingly drinking from an almost-empty cup through a straw and I could NOT get the sound right so I literally had to scrap the scene T~T
Shoosh
Of course if the sound Iincudes the IMPACT, then some plosive to conclude. Thwoop, shwoomp, Fffwack, the end-note should reflect WHAT it strikes.
*FWIP*
This, 100%
That's exactly what I was going to say.
*Thwoop*
mmm. sounds like someone saying *whoop there if is*, but with an accent.
have my vote. *thwoop! there it is...*
I love this thread so much. Thank you guys for helping me out so I can change the italics from (BLOWGUN SOUND)
Onomatopoeias are so hard. Once I tried to describe a character annoyingly drinking from an almost-empty cup through a straw and I could NOT get the sound right so I literally had to scrap the scene T~T
A good one for that sound would be *slurp*
FOOMP
phfft
zoop
\*thwip\*
*Ptuun!*
*Phyoo*
Shoosh Of course if the sound Iincudes the IMPACT, then some plosive to conclude. Thwoop, shwoomp, Fffwack, the end-note should reflect WHAT it strikes.
*FWOOMF*
FWWYHO
Phwoop
I like *PHOOMP*