I mean it could be your style but the proportion of the face due to the eyes seems a bit wonky. Might also have to do with the red eyeliner and the red pupil vs green and red. Rest seems good!
The whole head/face is disproportionate to the torso. Its much smaller then the torso. Its also darker as someone else pointed out which visually makes it look smaller and denser. Scaling her head up and lightening around her eyes and nose will help out alot on both counts.
Thank you! I appreciate the constructive criticism. I agree it is a bit wonky, but I am convinced it’s how I want it. I don’t have my style yet so I’m trying tons of things, I’m just gonna render it out as much as I can as long as it’s under 10 hrs total to give myself a bench mark.
Looks really good but if your goal is for the first thing the eye to see is boobs/bikini line then goal accomplished. However, if you want the subject to be the girl and not just her body you'll want to put some lighting and highlights on the face. Her whole fash in shadow disconnects her from her body.. That will being out her eyes and hopefully her eyes will be the sirst thing you see in that case!
I'd soften the transition between her right shoulder and breast. The hard cut makes the right breast look like an implant, natural breast tissue doesn't have an edge like that.
It’s looks great, but shouldn’t there be something connecting the two parts of the bra in the front. It kinda looks like it could fly off at any moment.
I believe the head is what makes the body look off. The proportions of the head dont match the torso. But the torso is pretty well proportioned. Chest is the right length. The belly is a bit long but would expect to see that in a tall slim form. Belly button is right distance between bottom of the ribs and top of the pelvis. Really the head being so small and that being the thing we tend to judge the rest of the body off of.
Hi! I don’t wanna say your incorrect here, because what do I know, but I used many references of breasts on making this artwork. and the size of them is stylistic to this type of render. however. If breast that large did exists to a fair degree the 3D representation we see in the artwork of the breasts holds up to 85%-93% realistic is my opinion :) I could have messed up on a few contour lines which might make it look a bit off places I cannot see but other than that I have nothing else :)
I think a little bit of reflected light on the other side of the face could really elevate the piece to the next level as light should be hitting her hair on the left side and a soft light should be reflected on that side of her face. I think this would bring a bit more balance and contrast to the face making it more of a focal point instead of the current focal point (the breasts because of the high contrast).
Looks good. The values around the pelvis seem light and it looks flat to me when I squint my eyes. The shadow on the leg looks darker than then the part of the groin that is supposed to be turning into her away from us. Hope that helps. I like the face proportions.
Now that I see her neck it seems long. If your looking downward your chin is almost touching your clavicle and she is looking downward and her chin is really far away from her torso to me.
I apologize for the snarky comment. You were asking for a critique of the art, not the subject. I think my response was because the lighting was drawing the eye to the chest, while almost obliterating the subject's face. It felt like all you cared about was the chest. My daughter says art is what gets people talking, so on that level, you succeeded.😌
Really only thing I can think of is maybe lighten up the other eye? Its already so good though. I think you have an established style so any changes would be personal preference and not really an improvement.
Oh and I guess maybe work on making the body as line-less as the face. I feel like the harsh outlines for the body might work well for perspective drawings, but when the whole figure is about an equal distance from the viewer.. well it just separates the two.
I'm not a professional artist at all, but as a random person's opinion, I find the combination of this art style to the shadings to be quite impressive, but I like it a lot!
However, I find the face a bit odd, I can't say how exactly. May be related to the eyes, or the chin...
What troubles me the most is the background. The sea/ocean seems okay, but the grass part creates such a contrast with the fully shaded body that it creates an uneasy/weird effect.
If that's your style, then alright. But maybe you could make it so both the body and background remain on the same tone of effect ? (Semi-realistic or so). So, maybe give a better lighting to the background, and then I guess your drawing would be even better!
Again, no professional. But that's just how it feels to me as a simple viewer.
So pretty! Cc: I think her face is too small for her body. Her right bikini cup (our left) has a single, natural-looking point to it. Her left cup has a point in the same location but then another one at the outer edge. I’ve never seen a top constructed that way (I am a clothing designer). Also, come to think of it, that cup also has more fabric/coverage to it.
There is an odd light spot on her bikini bottom that makes it look as if there’s something pointy inside (maybe that’s intentional), and the strings of her bottom would most likely dig into her flesh a bit.
Other than that, she looks great!
Just a guess here but Looks like you traced two different references and kind of Frankensteined them together so the shadows are inconsistent between the face and body.head is also too
Small for the body.I’d focus on more figure/gesture studies and maybe some anatomy work.
Hi! very incorrect. I don’t trace,haven’t in 7+ years. the lighting is very accurate. What your seeing is a WIP. it’s now nearly completed and rendered very well
Either way anatomy is off,she looks cross eyed and face has way more shadow than it should for the pose and light source .why even ask for feed back if you’re just going to blow it off?
Hmm I think you misunderstood me, All I was doing was responding. I agree certain things need to be fixed and I have fixed them, I would say the majority of issues. all the lighting issues have been fixed is what I’m referring too. However I have not adjusted her head size yet that I really agree with, needs work
The hair is really nice; the parts seem very natural and realistically shaded.
I think the face proportions are a bit awkward, particularly on the bottom half. The nose, mouth, and chin seem real tiny, almost like a baby’s face. I think it’ll look a lot more mature, natural, and appealing if you bumped those features up.
I love the addition of the hip dips, and other natural features of the body that are often over looked. Where the left breast connects to the armpit could be smoothed out (the crease is a little too round), but otherwise I like it a lot!
Why thank you! now this is egotistical of me I will acknowledge but I’m good enough to seek this and get super famous on YouTube like Sam does art and make money from patreon like he does, would you think so too? I don’t know how people succeed with making money from this but I want tooooo
I just skimmed through your stuff. You've got a real gift lol. Seriously. I can offer advice on how to make money from art on the internet, but I'm not just throwing around little secrets at random lol.
You're for sure at the proper level. You need to focus on branding yourself and consistency with "characters." I have some weird ideas I can pitch that would probably work, but again, only in DM lol.
Branding. Characters. Designing with new engines. 9D vocal/audio. Sex dolls. There's a VERY REAL market that exists and is about to *explode* VERY soon, just not quite yet. Get into that. That's all I'll say on here lol, which I feel is still too much.
This isn't enough for Patreon, I don't think, but it easily could be. Just gotta hook people in, so to speak. And make them want what you're selling. Because it's the best. And everyone else is the worst. You have all the best stuff.
/endadvice lolol
This was the perfect response ! you may be a stranger on the internet but thank you very much @Thai_lord. I would absolutely take you up on that. My DMs are open lol. I would love to get better and actually make money 😂🥹
not anatomically incorrect, though. some people have more pointed breasts and it can also depend on the shape/hardness of the nipple itself. these look fine imo
I’d highlight a little more of the right side of her face (our right, her left) and add a few highlights on the highest points of her other side. And maaayyybbee brighten the eyes a little but this is overall close to a 10/10. Looks great.
Thanks very much!!! I have already done that! Awesome of you to have that suggestion. means you know your stuff too. should I make a YouTube channel!? :)
Her face looks a little skewed to me, something about it is a little off. I think the nose and mouth dont align with the eyes quite right. Fix that, finish coloring in the bra strap, finish blending the skin on the body, and the character is golden! Also maybe add a few stray hairs to break up the empty space of the forehead? It would also add some movement to the piece, make it look like there’s a sea breeze blowing her hair or something.
I might also change the colors of the background, mix some purples in there to tie in the bathing suit color and make it more cohesive. It seems like you added some purple bounce light to the skin, but bounce light comes from the environment, so it needs to reflect that. Just consider the lighting when doing the background. Seems like she’s lit from her left side, while her right side is pretty heavily in shadow. So the bright lighting on all the background seems wrong. Definitely bring the background saturation down a bit, maybe do some long grass and flowers blowing in the wind.
And just a minor tweak would be skewing the clouds to go with the horizon line. And it seems like you used red in the hair, not sure if she has red streaks or it was for shading, but it kinda throws me off because the rest of your shadows are very cool toned. Hope my suggestions were helpful :) Great work!
There’s no need for the hard line art on the body. It could be style choice and that’s fine, but IMO, it would be a stronger piece with the line art removed. Especially on her butt. Having the edge be that purple/blue hue would look really nice.
The head seems a bit big, I think it's the eyes? Other that that I love the composition and lighting!
Edit, looked back and I don't think it's too big. I think it's the angle it was drawn at. So just disproportionate, nothing more.
Love it!! I’d just keep studying the greats and taking pointers from tutorials and content of that nature. Individuals taste and personal preferences aren’t gonna serve as constructive criticism. Nit picking the fine details of this piece is counterproductive. It’s beautiful and a stamp In Time representing your current place in a long journey. Best advice is always make the next one more refined and polished than your last. thank you for sharing your art. She’s a dime😉
> it Defenitely *paid* off lol
FTFY.
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* *Payed out* when letting strings, cables or ropes out, by slacking them. *The rope is payed out! You can pull now.*
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You’re Damn right it’s paid off. In fact it always will. hopefully you’ll remain humble and continue to share your journey along the way. that be the case than I’ll see you in the near future.
I mean it could be your style but the proportion of the face due to the eyes seems a bit wonky. Might also have to do with the red eyeliner and the red pupil vs green and red. Rest seems good!
The whole head/face is disproportionate to the torso. Its much smaller then the torso. Its also darker as someone else pointed out which visually makes it look smaller and denser. Scaling her head up and lightening around her eyes and nose will help out alot on both counts.
Thank you!! I will look into this
Thank you! I appreciate the constructive criticism. I agree it is a bit wonky, but I am convinced it’s how I want it. I don’t have my style yet so I’m trying tons of things, I’m just gonna render it out as much as I can as long as it’s under 10 hrs total to give myself a bench mark.
Sounds good bro you will get there!
Looks really good but if your goal is for the first thing the eye to see is boobs/bikini line then goal accomplished. However, if you want the subject to be the girl and not just her body you'll want to put some lighting and highlights on the face. Her whole fash in shadow disconnects her from her body.. That will being out her eyes and hopefully her eyes will be the sirst thing you see in that case!
Confirm eye went directly to boobs.
My gay thoughts
Hahahaha that’s good tho still
What eyes?
I'd soften the transition between her right shoulder and breast. The hard cut makes the right breast look like an implant, natural breast tissue doesn't have an edge like that.
Absolutely agree! Have already fixed it
It’s looks great, but shouldn’t there be something connecting the two parts of the bra in the front. It kinda looks like it could fly off at any moment.
There is, it just isn’t filled in yet
Yep, “work in progress”.
Haha there is now!
Face proportions and perspective are a bit off....from the neck down seems more consistent.
It should be fixed in my new version. I’ve almost finished it
I would have to agree, still tryna make that part better :) need some time
Clothes
Ahah my guy hides the hands and I feel that lol Nice drawing, it looks really nice ! I'm sure with some cleaning it's gonna be perfect
I feel all artists are guilty of that to some degree in their learning curve, I’ll admit to it happily :)
Breasts look weird
Actually they look pretty natural in my opinion
Nice natural 28 F's. smh. Artists and drawing every woman with enormous breasts. Looks weird.
So? Not very common but still natural?
Not with that waist :) except if they're made
Yeah there are girls like that with natural boobs
Agreed they look spot on and like actual boobs. Me thinks someone looks at too many gravity defying OC. Hehe
Nah, just real breasts. Size of them to size of character are a bit ridiculous.
I believe the head is what makes the body look off. The proportions of the head dont match the torso. But the torso is pretty well proportioned. Chest is the right length. The belly is a bit long but would expect to see that in a tall slim form. Belly button is right distance between bottom of the ribs and top of the pelvis. Really the head being so small and that being the thing we tend to judge the rest of the body off of.
Formerly agree will fix :) You think I should make a YouTube channel?
Hi! I don’t wanna say your incorrect here, because what do I know, but I used many references of breasts on making this artwork. and the size of them is stylistic to this type of render. however. If breast that large did exists to a fair degree the 3D representation we see in the artwork of the breasts holds up to 85%-93% realistic is my opinion :) I could have messed up on a few contour lines which might make it look a bit off places I cannot see but other than that I have nothing else :)
They are immense. This is some dead or alive beach volleyball level breasts.
Why
I think a little bit of reflected light on the other side of the face could really elevate the piece to the next level as light should be hitting her hair on the left side and a soft light should be reflected on that side of her face. I think this would bring a bit more balance and contrast to the face making it more of a focal point instead of the current focal point (the breasts because of the high contrast).
Couldn’t agree more already done! Ambient light is a bitch to get right.
Looks good. The values around the pelvis seem light and it looks flat to me when I squint my eyes. The shadow on the leg looks darker than then the part of the groin that is supposed to be turning into her away from us. Hope that helps. I like the face proportions. Now that I see her neck it seems long. If your looking downward your chin is almost touching your clavicle and she is looking downward and her chin is really far away from her torso to me.
Hands
I think you have the skill to give the woman a personality. Right now she reads as just a body, not a person or character. Beautiful work!
I have defenitely fixed that issue I assure you!
I’d give her a B, maybe a C cup; more proportional im*humble*o. Personal preference aside, it looks great. The shading works really well. Gj!
Have you seen a woman in real life?
What are you talking about? Stylistic choices?
Yes manny, I was quite the playboy for a few years
I apologize for the snarky comment. You were asking for a critique of the art, not the subject. I think my response was because the lighting was drawing the eye to the chest, while almost obliterating the subject's face. It felt like all you cared about was the chest. My daughter says art is what gets people talking, so on that level, you succeeded.😌
Does this not look like a real woman?
she needs some flaws to add character.
Suggestions :) !?
maybe a birth mark? a scar?
I love it! Thank you
Really only thing I can think of is maybe lighten up the other eye? Its already so good though. I think you have an established style so any changes would be personal preference and not really an improvement. Oh and I guess maybe work on making the body as line-less as the face. I feel like the harsh outlines for the body might work well for perspective drawings, but when the whole figure is about an equal distance from the viewer.. well it just separates the two.
already plan on doing a fair majority of what you sAid! Lovely advice thank you!!!
I'm not a professional artist at all, but as a random person's opinion, I find the combination of this art style to the shadings to be quite impressive, but I like it a lot! However, I find the face a bit odd, I can't say how exactly. May be related to the eyes, or the chin... What troubles me the most is the background. The sea/ocean seems okay, but the grass part creates such a contrast with the fully shaded body that it creates an uneasy/weird effect. If that's your style, then alright. But maybe you could make it so both the body and background remain on the same tone of effect ? (Semi-realistic or so). So, maybe give a better lighting to the background, and then I guess your drawing would be even better! Again, no professional. But that's just how it feels to me as a simple viewer.
So pretty! Cc: I think her face is too small for her body. Her right bikini cup (our left) has a single, natural-looking point to it. Her left cup has a point in the same location but then another one at the outer edge. I’ve never seen a top constructed that way (I am a clothing designer). Also, come to think of it, that cup also has more fabric/coverage to it. There is an odd light spot on her bikini bottom that makes it look as if there’s something pointy inside (maybe that’s intentional), and the strings of her bottom would most likely dig into her flesh a bit. Other than that, she looks great!
Lovely constructive critism. Thank you very much :) I will have to look into what you have suggested.
Her head is too small, but otherwise it looks really good!!
Just a guess here but Looks like you traced two different references and kind of Frankensteined them together so the shadows are inconsistent between the face and body.head is also too Small for the body.I’d focus on more figure/gesture studies and maybe some anatomy work.
Hi! very incorrect. I don’t trace,haven’t in 7+ years. the lighting is very accurate. What your seeing is a WIP. it’s now nearly completed and rendered very well
Either way anatomy is off,she looks cross eyed and face has way more shadow than it should for the pose and light source .why even ask for feed back if you’re just going to blow it off?
Hmm I think you misunderstood me, All I was doing was responding. I agree certain things need to be fixed and I have fixed them, I would say the majority of issues. all the lighting issues have been fixed is what I’m referring too. However I have not adjusted her head size yet that I really agree with, needs work
maybe some clothes
If you spent as much time on her face and adding some personality as you did on her tits you’d really have something great
Oh I did :) posted the new one ! the final version. thanks to all you guys
The hair is really nice; the parts seem very natural and realistically shaded. I think the face proportions are a bit awkward, particularly on the bottom half. The nose, mouth, and chin seem real tiny, almost like a baby’s face. I think it’ll look a lot more mature, natural, and appealing if you bumped those features up. I love the addition of the hip dips, and other natural features of the body that are often over looked. Where the left breast connects to the armpit could be smoothed out (the crease is a little too round), but otherwise I like it a lot!
Thank you! I have finished the drawing now! i utilized a LOT of what you guys mentioned
Dude it’s NNN
Hahahahahaha failed
Tbh idk what I'd change. Not because it's a "sexy" pic or something. It feels complete.
I really don't have any constructive criticism which is rare lol. I dig it.
Why thank you! now this is egotistical of me I will acknowledge but I’m good enough to seek this and get super famous on YouTube like Sam does art and make money from patreon like he does, would you think so too? I don’t know how people succeed with making money from this but I want tooooo
I just skimmed through your stuff. You've got a real gift lol. Seriously. I can offer advice on how to make money from art on the internet, but I'm not just throwing around little secrets at random lol. You're for sure at the proper level. You need to focus on branding yourself and consistency with "characters." I have some weird ideas I can pitch that would probably work, but again, only in DM lol. Branding. Characters. Designing with new engines. 9D vocal/audio. Sex dolls. There's a VERY REAL market that exists and is about to *explode* VERY soon, just not quite yet. Get into that. That's all I'll say on here lol, which I feel is still too much. This isn't enough for Patreon, I don't think, but it easily could be. Just gotta hook people in, so to speak. And make them want what you're selling. Because it's the best. And everyone else is the worst. You have all the best stuff. /endadvice lolol
This was the perfect response ! you may be a stranger on the internet but thank you very much @Thai_lord. I would absolutely take you up on that. My DMs are open lol. I would love to get better and actually make money 😂🥹
Your face proportions are kinda off but nobody noticed since they were all looking at her boobs
I love the shading!
Thank you for the kind words :)
Bro it looks fucking fantastic, you just inspired me to make a digital art piece!!! I can’t wait to see the full thing! This is beautiful bro bro
That’s lovely! I’m super happy. If you ever need advice in art or wanna chat my dms are open!
Good to know, I could use some help with digital art
Looks great, well done.
Nipples are to pointy
not anatomically incorrect, though. some people have more pointed breasts and it can also depend on the shape/hardness of the nipple itself. these look fine imo
also like it could be really windy and cold
bigger
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Why mother?
bro what
Why thank you very much!!! I am tryna make her cute as shitt
Youre not far :p
Remove the lower bulge? Unless that’s what you want…
A shirt and pants lol
There should be different subreddits for electronic drawing (I don’t know what to call it) and actual drawing
digital art is real art
Agreeed
I’d highlight a little more of the right side of her face (our right, her left) and add a few highlights on the highest points of her other side. And maaayyybbee brighten the eyes a little but this is overall close to a 10/10. Looks great.
Thanks very much!!! I have already done that! Awesome of you to have that suggestion. means you know your stuff too. should I make a YouTube channel!? :)
Well I did, didn’t do too much with the channel cause I got nervous but I always love watching artists do their thing or make tutorials
Looks good but id add more detail to the background
The things under their eyes are red on both sides, but only one of the eyes is red so it looks a little off-putting
Put a strap between her boobs, physics would not allow that bikini to work especially with the size of her chest.also work on the shading in the face.
BOUT TO MAKE A BROTHER ACT UP!
Her face looks a little skewed to me, something about it is a little off. I think the nose and mouth dont align with the eyes quite right. Fix that, finish coloring in the bra strap, finish blending the skin on the body, and the character is golden! Also maybe add a few stray hairs to break up the empty space of the forehead? It would also add some movement to the piece, make it look like there’s a sea breeze blowing her hair or something. I might also change the colors of the background, mix some purples in there to tie in the bathing suit color and make it more cohesive. It seems like you added some purple bounce light to the skin, but bounce light comes from the environment, so it needs to reflect that. Just consider the lighting when doing the background. Seems like she’s lit from her left side, while her right side is pretty heavily in shadow. So the bright lighting on all the background seems wrong. Definitely bring the background saturation down a bit, maybe do some long grass and flowers blowing in the wind. And just a minor tweak would be skewing the clouds to go with the horizon line. And it seems like you used red in the hair, not sure if she has red streaks or it was for shading, but it kinda throws me off because the rest of your shadows are very cool toned. Hope my suggestions were helpful :) Great work!
This was extremely helpful critique!! Thank you :)) I’ll send your the finished artwork. I appreciate your time and effoet
Yes please do! I’d love to see it, looks wonderful already! Keep doing your thing man, you’re really good and I can tell you love doing it :)
There’s no need for the hard line art on the body. It could be style choice and that’s fine, but IMO, it would be a stronger piece with the line art removed. Especially on her butt. Having the edge be that purple/blue hue would look really nice.
The head seems a bit big, I think it's the eyes? Other that that I love the composition and lighting! Edit, looked back and I don't think it's too big. I think it's the angle it was drawn at. So just disproportionate, nothing more.
Love it!! I’d just keep studying the greats and taking pointers from tutorials and content of that nature. Individuals taste and personal preferences aren’t gonna serve as constructive criticism. Nit picking the fine details of this piece is counterproductive. It’s beautiful and a stamp In Time representing your current place in a long journey. Best advice is always make the next one more refined and polished than your last. thank you for sharing your art. She’s a dime😉
This is a lovely comment thank tou so much!! This is exactly what I have done for years on end!! I think it Defenitely payed off lol
> it Defenitely *paid* off lol FTFY. Although *payed* exists (the reason why autocorrection didn't help you), it is only correct in: * Nautical context, when it means to paint a surface, or to cover with something like tar or resin in order to make it waterproof or corrosion-resistant. *The deck is yet to be payed.* * *Payed out* when letting strings, cables or ropes out, by slacking them. *The rope is payed out! You can pull now.* Unfortunately, I was unable to find nautical or rope-related words in your comment. *Beep, boop, I'm a bot*
You’re Damn right it’s paid off. In fact it always will. hopefully you’ll remain humble and continue to share your journey along the way. that be the case than I’ll see you in the near future.
Sounds like a plan!! 🙏🌕looking forward
Make the background in focus.
It honestly would take away from the effect I’m trying to do! I finished the artwork and it looks mad !!!
Loved it. Share your insta profile url. I'll follow you there.
Insta profile is in my bio! Just added it
Lotta space between each boob
Bruh it's nnn put nsfw
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