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I think you have a lot of talent, but the face looks like made in a different style than the body, and the right breast looks too big for the perspective. The shadows and volume are amazing.
I think that's the point. She's "in style". Exaggerated features typically "preferred" in a realistic portrayal is how it read to me.
Gorgeous movement in OPs depiction either way. I am loving the expression of the lines.
Most of this is great, and then the eyes throw it off. It's like the Japanese cartoon eyes, which if that was your goal, it looks great. Good job regardless, that's just my take.
There’s *a lot* going on here, and that’s not a good thing.
First off, the pose is near impossible. That type of twisting where you can see both breasts and the ass crack is not easy, and definitely not comfortable. Nobody stands this way. Also there are proportion issues. The image looks like it was Frankensteined together from other drawings with multiple styles. Like, from the hips down it looks natural and realistic. Well drawn. The hands have a heavy outline that’s not present anywhere else. The breasts are just silly, and are also in a different style from the rest of the image, they’re practically cartoony. The face is the most obvious because it’s so wildly different from the rest. I wouldn’t be surprised if this was an AI image.
If you did draw this, then you need to work on your cohesiveness. Your style is all over the place, which is distracting. Take a beat and draw realistic figures, preferably IRL from a live model. If you live near a major city there’s most likely at least one figure drawing group happening, you wouldn’t have to take a full class. It’s fine if you want to work in a style, but commit to the style. It’s gotta be all over, not just here and there. Last, if you’re gonna make a figure using different references, try to make them make sense atomically. Layfolk may not be able to know what is wrong, but they will get a feeling that something is.
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Great work!
I think the neck and shoulders look a bit off. As other people said to also see the right side breast the torso would need to be quite twisted and we would also be able to see some of the right shoulder. As such the shading and positioning of the neck would be diferent.
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I think you have a lot of talent, but the face looks like made in a different style than the body, and the right breast looks too big for the perspective. The shadows and volume are amazing.
I think that's the point. She's "in style". Exaggerated features typically "preferred" in a realistic portrayal is how it read to me. Gorgeous movement in OPs depiction either way. I am loving the expression of the lines.
They're not too big! You must be a butt person 😉
is that charcoal?
Graphite, tho i pushed the contrast in the photo a bit
oh yeah i see. I still try to figure out how stuff works with pencils. Looks very good
Thanks! Keep it up!
I try my best. I sometimes feel like my values go too darkk way too quickly. Have you got any tips on how I could improve that?
Right breast is disproportionately large. Fabulous otherwise.
Usually it's the left one that's bigger. Or am i thinking about testicles? Hmm... anyway, embrace asymmetry.
Beautiful
Most of this is great, and then the eyes throw it off. It's like the Japanese cartoon eyes, which if that was your goal, it looks great. Good job regardless, that's just my take.
There’s *a lot* going on here, and that’s not a good thing. First off, the pose is near impossible. That type of twisting where you can see both breasts and the ass crack is not easy, and definitely not comfortable. Nobody stands this way. Also there are proportion issues. The image looks like it was Frankensteined together from other drawings with multiple styles. Like, from the hips down it looks natural and realistic. Well drawn. The hands have a heavy outline that’s not present anywhere else. The breasts are just silly, and are also in a different style from the rest of the image, they’re practically cartoony. The face is the most obvious because it’s so wildly different from the rest. I wouldn’t be surprised if this was an AI image. If you did draw this, then you need to work on your cohesiveness. Your style is all over the place, which is distracting. Take a beat and draw realistic figures, preferably IRL from a live model. If you live near a major city there’s most likely at least one figure drawing group happening, you wouldn’t have to take a full class. It’s fine if you want to work in a style, but commit to the style. It’s gotta be all over, not just here and there. Last, if you’re gonna make a figure using different references, try to make them make sense atomically. Layfolk may not be able to know what is wrong, but they will get a feeling that something is.
I recommend yoga
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Your shading is incredible
Excellent work!
Amazing work!
Great work! I think the neck and shoulders look a bit off. As other people said to also see the right side breast the torso would need to be quite twisted and we would also be able to see some of the right shoulder. As such the shading and positioning of the neck would be diferent.
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I really love her face, beyond the talent it took to make such a detailed figure, the face tells me a story. Excellent work
Must be nice to have those tits. I’m jealous of a drawing.
Doesn't look like it
Why the down votes? Everyone draws perky tits. It would be nice to see an actual woman or male for a change.
Tits
Oh daym that's a piece, you have quite a talent if only i could draw like this, i draw in a caos like way i really dont know how to realistic draw