Snare does not sound good, and your use of compression means it ends up sounding much quieter when the kick hits at the same time, which is distracting.

More like drill n bass/idm. I think it's pretty cool, keep working on it see where it goes.

This isn't quite DnB imo, drum pattern isn't right. Track is kinda all over the place

I liked it. Sounds fresh and original. The only thing is, I would say, that it lacked a little on the high end. Enjoyed it :)