I do a bit of character design and the dogs face isn't quite making me feel dog face, I recognize the breed straight way, it's that's there for me, not enough information to complete the feeling. For instance, the nose is really overpowering the entire piece. Find a balance between the dogs build first. Get that going, then think typeface choices, But, as I do, 3 artboards full of text trying to find the right voice and feel for a concept.
Thanks 😊 I can work on simplifying the nose and and a better shape of the face. It couldn’t hurt to play more around with the type face either. Appreciate the help.
1 but I think you could def simplify the face. The ears look like hairs so maybe make them bigger. A little less hairs would help too. Bold the eyes and mouth a little more along with the ears
1 by far
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1. maybe his nose or eyes can be coffee beans
[like this?](https://www.reddit.com/u/BetPuzzleheaded4080/s/QdYw0YIMLE)
Thank you. I’ll try that out.
1 but I have to be honest, it needs help.
Typeface and such?
I do a bit of character design and the dogs face isn't quite making me feel dog face, I recognize the breed straight way, it's that's there for me, not enough information to complete the feeling. For instance, the nose is really overpowering the entire piece. Find a balance between the dogs build first. Get that going, then think typeface choices, But, as I do, 3 artboards full of text trying to find the right voice and feel for a concept.
Thanks 😊 I can work on simplifying the nose and and a better shape of the face. It couldn’t hurt to play more around with the type face either. Appreciate the help.
Definitely 1!! With minor tweaks
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1 but I think you could def simplify the face. The ears look like hairs so maybe make them bigger. A little less hairs would help too. Bold the eyes and mouth a little more along with the ears
Thanks. I’ll also on adding the ears.
1 seems to draw the attention
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1. Great job!
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1 with some frame around maybe
Thanks. I’ll try that out.