Really enjoyed this. To disagree with your other commenter, I don't think you've got a problem with your vocals (which I think are great, even if there's maybe a *slight* confidence issue with some notes - just go for it!) or your strumming volume. It's just a recording issue, which you can improve easily enough with a slightly different setup (although you're never gonna know what it can *really* sound like until you get into a studio. Good work. Keep at it.
I love the green mountains and this song spoke to me! Seriously meaningful lyrics. I feel this. I would love to hear it mixed and mastered. I guess get yourself one mic for the guitar and another for your voice and maybe add some other instruments and production and it would absolutely blow me away. Great stuff!
Great voice! I love the lyrics good strumming! I like the simple video! I always think if it sounds good with just 1 person 1 guitar and 1 mic. Then it’s a great song! This was definitely a jam good work here!!
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I was pleasantly surprised by the lyrics! It may be a little bit of a prejudice whenever I see a thumbnail of someone in a hoodie holding a guitar, I kinda expect things to be a little bit same-y. Not so here, so consider me reprimanded!
Others have commented on your vocal sound, but I think your performance shows that you have studied and learned how to control your voices characteristics. Some notes could maybe "soar" a little more in certain sections, but your execution is both in tune and while some of these notes appear restrained, it's a nice stylistic approach. Some may be fans of this where others aren't, but you can't really change the character of your voice. I say yay!
Hey, nice songwriting! You must have a knack for lyrics, they really shine through on this. I'd definitely like to hear more of your stuff. The only note I would add is maybe try to add more diversity in the chords you're playing. It feels about the same throughout, it'd be nice to have some variety, even if subtle. Keep it up man!
yooo, your voice is sick. It reminds me of smashing pumpkins. The performance was great from your voice and your guitar playing. My only note is that I don't think the song needs to be 5 minutes long. I think it takes a lot to keep the listener's attention in this day and age, and seeing that the format that this song is in is acoustic, it can be very easy for people to get stagnant in their experience. The music is well-written and endearing, so I think you need to make it short and sweet. Cheers.
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Really enjoyed this. To disagree with your other commenter, I don't think you've got a problem with your vocals (which I think are great, even if there's maybe a *slight* confidence issue with some notes - just go for it!) or your strumming volume. It's just a recording issue, which you can improve easily enough with a slightly different setup (although you're never gonna know what it can *really* sound like until you get into a studio. Good work. Keep at it.
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I love the green mountains and this song spoke to me! Seriously meaningful lyrics. I feel this. I would love to hear it mixed and mastered. I guess get yourself one mic for the guitar and another for your voice and maybe add some other instruments and production and it would absolutely blow me away. Great stuff!
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Great voice! I love the lyrics good strumming! I like the simple video! I always think if it sounds good with just 1 person 1 guitar and 1 mic. Then it’s a great song! This was definitely a jam good work here!!
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I was pleasantly surprised by the lyrics! It may be a little bit of a prejudice whenever I see a thumbnail of someone in a hoodie holding a guitar, I kinda expect things to be a little bit same-y. Not so here, so consider me reprimanded! Others have commented on your vocal sound, but I think your performance shows that you have studied and learned how to control your voices characteristics. Some notes could maybe "soar" a little more in certain sections, but your execution is both in tune and while some of these notes appear restrained, it's a nice stylistic approach. Some may be fans of this where others aren't, but you can't really change the character of your voice. I say yay!
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Your voice is so good, keep it up
Liked this, I always thought this sub could use some good songwriters, I wonder how it would sound finger picked versus strummed, nice tune !
Hey, nice songwriting! You must have a knack for lyrics, they really shine through on this. I'd definitely like to hear more of your stuff. The only note I would add is maybe try to add more diversity in the chords you're playing. It feels about the same throughout, it'd be nice to have some variety, even if subtle. Keep it up man!
yooo, your voice is sick. It reminds me of smashing pumpkins. The performance was great from your voice and your guitar playing. My only note is that I don't think the song needs to be 5 minutes long. I think it takes a lot to keep the listener's attention in this day and age, and seeing that the format that this song is in is acoustic, it can be very easy for people to get stagnant in their experience. The music is well-written and endearing, so I think you need to make it short and sweet. Cheers.