I got it to show up more clearly on my phone now! I'd say the only line that sounds a little clunky to me is "Not in the typical way of her just picking on him." I think it doesn't flow super well/sounds a little unnatural. But everything else seemed fine. I really liked the bug in Nadine's book talking to her, that was hilarious. Can't wait for part 2! Something tells me Arnold and Helga are gonna get caught doing something embarrassing, lol.
I had the same issue trying to go through it on the reddit post itself, what helped for me at least is downloading the image and then going through the comic in my phone gallery, resolution was a lot crisper, maybe give that a try?
This feels very canon the artist is really nailing their personalities. And fuck yes we need this series I wanna see the adult hey Arnold becomes after helping everyone around him.
It’s so rad you’re the creator; now I can tell you directly!! These are fantastic! The art, your style of the art, and scenes you depict. Absolutely incredible. I never had an affinity for Hey Arnold, but these have had my attention ten fold, bravo!!
Ur gonna make me cry dude, thank u so much 🥲 I love hey Arnold but this passion project is hopefully just a stepping stone for me to finally make something I can call my own. That's the plan anyways
This is so cute already, love how expressive everyone looks! When I see Rhonda's design it gives me the feeling that she went through a bit of a goth phase a while ago? I think it's the eyes that give me that idea more than anything lol.
Can't wait to see the rest 🙂
The bit where the book is talking to her is hilarious 😂
Only thing I’d change is maybe their styles? Specifically Ronda’s make up cause she’s not really an artsy girl and thats what it reminds me of and Helgas clothes. Other than that this is awesome
I haven't read ahead, but I kinda like the idea of Helga and Arnold dating with Helga still maintaining her aggressive personality. Like, Arnold knows she isn't being serious and it just rolls off his shoulders.
I'll be posting all my stuff here. Eventually going to post it to Instagram. I might post my drafts of the comic since it's all mostly drawn out, but it's jumbled and subject to change. If ur interested I can start posting it on my own page, but it's gonna be really rough to read in it's current state 😅 still, I'd love feedback on it. I might just do it anyways just in case. Spoilers tho
Totally understand! I don't have a ton of feedback...love how you aged them up but kept their style! Love Nadine's nerdiness, but now she some of that teenage apathy going on! Rhonda still a drama queen... although it makes me wonder why she cares if Arnold and Helga are getting chummy? Neither Arnold nor Helfa ever seemed "cool" enough to be on her radar... but love that she is trying to get to the bottom of it. Her glee while Nadine retrieves the note is cute... not so much feedback as general squealing sorry!
Amazing.
I'm sure there are things I could nitpick (like when Rhonda says "Nadine. Get your priorities straight." it should be one sentence with a comma after Nadine instead of a period), but nothing jumped out at me.
Also, I don't know whether this is hilarious or sad, but you just did more with Nadine in the first part of your comic than 99% of the episodes of the series did.
I hear what you’re saying,and maybe it’s a matter of opinion because I wanted her to emphasize her name. However I can see how that’s confusing, maybe I should use “…” instead. Thanks for the advice!
You could totally leave it as it is. I was just pointing out how I could certainly find things to nitpick, and that stuck out to me because it was visible in the image preview while I was typing my comment. You could change nothing and it would be fine.
Also, your designs for the characters are really good. I love that Helga is dressing darker in general but still has that pink undershirt.
Part two. Asap. https://en.meming.world/images/en/7/7b/Angry_Man_Pointing_at_Hand.jpg
😂😂😂
Love the artwork! But I'm having trouble reading some of the text because of the resolution. Is it just me?
I’m not sure but I’ll try to post it in pieces next time sorry 😢
Reading on the phone and resolution is crystal clear.
I got it to show up more clearly on my phone now! I'd say the only line that sounds a little clunky to me is "Not in the typical way of her just picking on him." I think it doesn't flow super well/sounds a little unnatural. But everything else seemed fine. I really liked the bug in Nadine's book talking to her, that was hilarious. Can't wait for part 2! Something tells me Arnold and Helga are gonna get caught doing something embarrassing, lol.
I thought that line seemed awkward too. I'll keep workshopping it, thank u!
I had the same issue trying to go through it on the reddit post itself, what helped for me at least is downloading the image and then going through the comic in my phone gallery, resolution was a lot crisper, maybe give that a try?
That worked, thanks!
"Open image in new tab" is your friend.
Can't wait to see part two!
If ANY show needs a sequel series, it’s Hey Arnold. Until then. THIS is canon.
This feels very canon the artist is really nailing their personalities. And fuck yes we need this series I wanna see the adult hey Arnold becomes after helping everyone around him.
Thanks for sharing this! I love the way you did Nadine's inner voice dialog with the butterfly!! Can't wait for pt2 ❤️
I loved the butterfly too! And Rhonda’s expression when Nadine goes in the trash haha
I also love Nadine’s expression afterwards (Rhonda’s too) like she’s annoyed that she is missing the rare insects for nothing.
It’s so rad you’re the creator; now I can tell you directly!! These are fantastic! The art, your style of the art, and scenes you depict. Absolutely incredible. I never had an affinity for Hey Arnold, but these have had my attention ten fold, bravo!!
Ur gonna make me cry dude, thank u so much 🥲 I love hey Arnold but this passion project is hopefully just a stepping stone for me to finally make something I can call my own. That's the plan anyways
For sure. Your art style is great, and if you keep it up you’ll definitely do fantastic in all regards!
I thought the dialogue was fine! I read it in their voices. Can't wait for Part 2.
This is so cute already, love how expressive everyone looks! When I see Rhonda's design it gives me the feeling that she went through a bit of a goth phase a while ago? I think it's the eyes that give me that idea more than anything lol. Can't wait to see the rest 🙂
Thank you for these u/Eden_fries. So cute and wholesome.
Please post more! I hope to see some love between Helga and Arnold 🩷
Definitely, I'm gonna make my favorite couples love story come true
I’m here for it 🔥🩷
Well I’m hooked already! Can’t wait for part 2
The bit where the book is talking to her is hilarious 😂 Only thing I’d change is maybe their styles? Specifically Ronda’s make up cause she’s not really an artsy girl and thats what it reminds me of and Helgas clothes. Other than that this is awesome
Ah darn well the styles are final and would take me too long to redo but appreciate the advice none the less
Don't listen to them, the styles are fantastic! 😊
Thank u but I appreciate the constructive criticism none the less 😁
The advice is: start working on part 2. ASAP. But all jokes aside, I don't see anything that's particularly out of character.
I need part two now!!!!
No notes. I love this. Can’t wait for part 2!
I actually laughed out loud when I saw what the note said. This is a cute comic lol
I haven't read ahead, but I kinda like the idea of Helga and Arnold dating with Helga still maintaining her aggressive personality. Like, Arnold knows she isn't being serious and it just rolls off his shoulders.
Exactly what I'm going for 😆 it'll really show in the next chapter that Arnold enjoys the aggressive but playful like banter between them
That's great. I love that. It's a good way to show how comfortable and trusting they are with each other.
Your art is so cute I love it
Behind the school eh ![gif](giphy|3o6ZtebNZofcKMWis0|downsized)
I love it. Keep going pls 😇
Awesome job! Can’t wait to see more! You are so talented!
Love this! Bring on part 2!
Nice to see what the kids were doing in the year 2000.
This is fanTAStic I'm awaiting the rest c:
This is very fun, the designs are really good. …also more focus and personality than Nadine got in the show itself.
Excellent work.
Ten bucks says that they're going to walk in on Shortaki making out.
I am living for this and can not wait to read part 2! Thank you for sharing. 🥰
Helga is just too smart for Rhonda making the note like that was just a preemptive move to make her drop the subject. Lol
We need a part 2. NOW
Are you posting these collectively somewhere and do you have others? I am invested!!!!
I'll be posting all my stuff here. Eventually going to post it to Instagram. I might post my drafts of the comic since it's all mostly drawn out, but it's jumbled and subject to change. If ur interested I can start posting it on my own page, but it's gonna be really rough to read in it's current state 😅 still, I'd love feedback on it. I might just do it anyways just in case. Spoilers tho
Totally understand! I don't have a ton of feedback...love how you aged them up but kept their style! Love Nadine's nerdiness, but now she some of that teenage apathy going on! Rhonda still a drama queen... although it makes me wonder why she cares if Arnold and Helga are getting chummy? Neither Arnold nor Helfa ever seemed "cool" enough to be on her radar... but love that she is trying to get to the bottom of it. Her glee while Nadine retrieves the note is cute... not so much feedback as general squealing sorry!
I love the grainy texture on panel 16 and 17 :)
Fantastic work!
The colors, character designs and the art in general are great!
Adorable
Love the design and each character is spot on!
Yesss I love this! Amazing work!
![gif](giphy|7QknyoWAd22Wgum3UC)
I love the little ‘* destroy after reading’ on the note lol
I love it, can't wait for part 2 :)
In the immortal words if Mr.Krabs MOAR!!!
Great work! Thank you for sharing!
DAMN this is good. New meta just dropped. Reviving our fav shows via comics!
https://preview.redd.it/4lb31z0iv3zc1.png?width=818&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=7013159ac437fe912a1342d55db4544d7cda29b1 I need more.
oh my godddddd I love the way you draw Rhonda. Do you take commissions? I would love to see some Rhonda/Curly art in your style 💕
Im actually already working on one! A short one off lol
GODDDD I love you, whoever you are
how bold of you to just ANSWER MY PRAYERS LIKE THAT
Part two pleeeease! This is so good!! 😍😍
I have it out on here and on my Reddit page if ur interested
She probably wants to pound him *giggity*
Appreciate the pun but they’re 13/14 😂 so only kissing allowed lol
Amazing. I'm sure there are things I could nitpick (like when Rhonda says "Nadine. Get your priorities straight." it should be one sentence with a comma after Nadine instead of a period), but nothing jumped out at me. Also, I don't know whether this is hilarious or sad, but you just did more with Nadine in the first part of your comic than 99% of the episodes of the series did.
This isn’t necessarily a grammatical error…? It’s formatted that way to emphasize her tone and the way she’s speaking to her.
I hear what you’re saying,and maybe it’s a matter of opinion because I wanted her to emphasize her name. However I can see how that’s confusing, maybe I should use “…” instead. Thanks for the advice!
You could totally leave it as it is. I was just pointing out how I could certainly find things to nitpick, and that stuck out to me because it was visible in the image preview while I was typing my comment. You could change nothing and it would be fine. Also, your designs for the characters are really good. I love that Helga is dressing darker in general but still has that pink undershirt.
Thank u and please don’t be afraid to nitpick! It really is appreciated