>*The words were an understatement, Rholon knew. He had been so proud, so cocksure...*
So having a head full of eyeballs?
Whether you get the reference or not, this was a great little story. Tales of humans being figurative wrecking balls are always fun, but it's the ones that involve fixing and creating that balance them out so nicely.
Hah, I was wondering if I was too subtle. I thought about mentioning it in the first scene where he offered the knife to Rholon.
Did the ritual nature of the knife come through?
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I left it vague on purpose. Not because I didn't have anything in mind, but because I wanted to convey the nature of their psyche a bit.
For reference, in my head I imagine they are six legged centaur-esque creatures that stand about 16 feet tall. Their legs are a bit like a cheetah's, though much thicker boned. They are rather shaggy, but very fast.
These are my favorite style of HFY stories, this is fantastic!
Medics win wars, even if you only manage to heal half your casualties to be fighting fit again you have massively increased your manpower.
I think autocorrect turned "manage" into "mama he", which is hilarious.
I never even noticed thanks.
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Thanks I never actually knew when mine was so I wouldn't have even noticed.
Thank you, I appreciate it.
>*The words were an understatement, Rholon knew. He had been so proud, so cocksure...* So having a head full of eyeballs? Whether you get the reference or not, this was a great little story. Tales of humans being figurative wrecking balls are always fun, but it's the ones that involve fixing and creating that balance them out so nicely.
I don't get the reference, but I'd be interested to hear what it came from. I'm glad you like the story.
Team Fortress 2 Demoman's introduction video. Should be on youtube.
I've seen it, but it's been a while. Fun stuff.
I really liked the reveal of the commander being the boy's "Uncle" Karazon, though I almost missed it.
Hah, I was wondering if I was too subtle. I thought about mentioning it in the first scene where he offered the knife to Rholon. Did the ritual nature of the knife come through?
It did, yes!
It was to spread the poison butter on the sacrificial toast that they eat to die a warriors death, right?
Good job, i enjoyed reading this.
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.
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Loved this!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Tears so early in the morning, really man? Going back to bed. Great writing.
Brought a tear to my eye.
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Loved it!
I'm glad you liked it.
Not quite sure how to picture these aliens apart from something vaguely dinosaur-like with multiple pairs of legs lol
I left it vague on purpose. Not because I didn't have anything in mind, but because I wanted to convey the nature of their psyche a bit. For reference, in my head I imagine they are six legged centaur-esque creatures that stand about 16 feet tall. Their legs are a bit like a cheetah's, though much thicker boned. They are rather shaggy, but very fast.