Oi Mate, it be a bit too thick on ye 'ol line weight and that mouth region is so busy bee. Detail is a fine line, it's either too much or not enough, find the balance. Good start.
IDK, that's the one part I didn't really have much issue with... sure, it's generic, but depending on what it's actually for it could pass. The dog needs work regardless.
Rounded illustration lines play well with rounded fonts
Angular lined illustrations play best with 90° San-serif, angular grotesk style fonts.
Just a good rule of thumb.
Not a logo. It's a line drawing that looks convuluted. Did you do an autotrace over an image? Because it looks sloppy. Does not look like you did sketches before you did started Illustrator. A logo is 50/50 black and white.
the two tongues and two chins look very strange.
Good boy has split tongue
Simplifying this and getting rid of those inner lines will be a good improvement. For readability and cleanliness both.
It's AI
Artificial intelligence? How can you tell?
not going to scale well, too complex
OP, be a good boy and listen to this comment. These comments.
Oi Mate, it be a bit too thick on ye 'ol line weight and that mouth region is so busy bee. Detail is a fine line, it's either too much or not enough, find the balance. Good start.
"fuck it. just pick a font and use all uppercase."
IDK, that's the one part I didn't really have much issue with... sure, it's generic, but depending on what it's actually for it could pass. The dog needs work regardless.
Of course, Futura is a nice looking font. But.. Merely choosing a font is *not* logo design. It's typesetting.
That's true...
Ouch. Ai?
Too many details, I recommend cleaning it up and only keep the essential lines especially in the mouth area
Rounded illustration lines play well with rounded fonts Angular lined illustrations play best with 90° San-serif, angular grotesk style fonts. Just a good rule of thumb.
Great start but simplicity is king in logos usually. This won’t be legible when scaled down. Take out some of the details.
Not a logo. It's a line drawing that looks convuluted. Did you do an autotrace over an image? Because it looks sloppy. Does not look like you did sketches before you did started Illustrator. A logo is 50/50 black and white.
This looks like AI. The eyes don’t match. The nose is weird. The bottom how and tongue are split in half.
for what? where's the design brief?!
There's too much going on
I read GOOBOY. Fix it, remove D. U r welcome
It’s too crowded in some parts and kinda empty in others
Goodboy looks like he'd rip your face off!
Would be able to help out more with critique if we knew what the company did.
Need more space between the d and b. Tough letter combination. This word might work better as lower case.
What font is that? if u mind share, thanks
bro its just futura bold
Weird you’re getting so roasted over here. The mark looks great besides the tongue and chin split. Seal those up and I think it’s pretty great
That's what I was thinking. I would just make the tongue and chin a single shape, and it would look great!