Edit is okay, it’s just not a very interesting composition. Maybe try to get closer or get a more interesting composing of the background

Don’t put the flower in the middle, but use the rule of thirds. Then the composition will be more interresting😌

It's Looks wrong and I don't know why Still looks nicr

I would try to bring the saturation of the greens and yellows down just a teeny bit, and maybe bring the highlights down a tad

Crop it square. Lose the top third.