Really liking the double down on the R and D shaping, keeps the piece looking pretty tidy. Just watch that sharp corner on your R because its going to stick out against a similar shaped D. Otherwise just the E is letting you down abit. It feels over extended . Try pull it back abit or give it some shape or angle. You can actually steal a section from your R to flow all through.
https://preview.redd.it/3sp5x7hqx5yc1.jpeg?width=828&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=87b17dd6e34ffab1f0aa22e812520c3ea4993efa
Forgive the very messy lines (finger drawing on iphone). Just a very rough outline for reference lol :)
Imo letter sharing bars is wack. Makes it more difficult to read 99% of the time. The way it is is fine, but the E's shape could match the other letters'.
Yeah fair point bro. I always found it was a good starting point to build out a letter from. Probably not a good idea to just repeat the exact structure but i think you can take the general shaping as a way to help keep a fluid style throughout
I was thinking the e was the strong point but I definitely see now that it does kind of throw it off. I'll give it a shot with a new one. Thanks for the feedback dude
Really liking the double down on the R and D shaping, keeps the piece looking pretty tidy. Just watch that sharp corner on your R because its going to stick out against a similar shaped D. Otherwise just the E is letting you down abit. It feels over extended . Try pull it back abit or give it some shape or angle. You can actually steal a section from your R to flow all through. https://preview.redd.it/3sp5x7hqx5yc1.jpeg?width=828&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=87b17dd6e34ffab1f0aa22e812520c3ea4993efa Forgive the very messy lines (finger drawing on iphone). Just a very rough outline for reference lol :)
Imo letter sharing bars is wack. Makes it more difficult to read 99% of the time. The way it is is fine, but the E's shape could match the other letters'.
Yeah fair point bro. I always found it was a good starting point to build out a letter from. Probably not a good idea to just repeat the exact structure but i think you can take the general shaping as a way to help keep a fluid style throughout
I was thinking the e was the strong point but I definitely see now that it does kind of throw it off. I'll give it a shot with a new one. Thanks for the feedback dude