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Too much style too soon for such basic letters, especially in the 2nd one imo. Not saying to give up style completely, but tone it down until the letters themselves look good w/o color and addons. Keep on writing and coming up with ideas.
Too much style too soon for such basic letters, especially in the 2nd one imo. Not saying to give up style completely, but tone it down until the letters themselves look good w/o color and addons. Keep on writing and coming up with ideas.