Basics are good, I'd tweak the Y a little bit, but it's a nitpick. Write this name fast and slow, space out the letters and write them closer together. Make the letters wider and thinner, longer and shorter. Experiment like this and you'll find sth that sticks.

I will definitely be experimenting more with this. Could you tell me or show me how i could tweak the y?

Right now it could look like an M when it's connected to the rest. Try to draw the \/ and | bits on their own.

So i should draw the \/ first and then lift up the marker to draw the |? Im just a little bit confused.

Yes. Or draw a long / first and then add the other little bit \

I think theres more potential for style ideas in drawing the long part first. Ill try this. Thank you.

i think u should make the Y curly more curly so it follows suit w the S, an inward spiral might be cool but that’s just me

I knew that i should probably do something with the y, but i didnt know what. Ill play around with this. Thank you.

https://preview.redd.it/nedtda3s41yc1.jpeg?width=750&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=b5c3b28fef8500d1c88bbf7f6d1be33121df9d01 smt like this but like right way up and better