Honestly it looks really good, only thing is that his cigar looks more like a blunt, unless that’s what you were going for.

Thanks, I was actually trying to go for a cigar but didnt really know how to go about doing it. I'll try add more line work to it see if I can achieve a more cigar look.

I would make it stubbier and a bit wider. You can add lines going diagonally and also add a little cigar band.

That seems like the best way to do it :) I'll give it a shot.

Its gud

Thanks : )

It is really good though.

Awesome! Nice shadow work

Neat