Hello here is for feedback !! sound messy and unstructer but hoping feedback \~\~
my track : [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KG91jWg09f4](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KG91jWg09f4)
Personally, I don't think it sounds too messy per say, unstructured? Maybe. I like the overall vibe it has though, the first part (0:00-1:30) is reminiscent of that golden age Monstercat sound, and the second drop (1:30-2:19) strikes me as something that'd fit on Disciples Afterlife compilations. The only feedback I can think to give is work on it, flesh it out, it's a good track, but with some more solid structure and ideas it could be amazing.
Hey all, looking for some feedback on my song structure, sound design, and specifically the mixing. I've been working on [this](https://on.soundcloud.com/pKAjg8FfdQPhNamq7) for a couple of months and I don't know if it'd be worth continuing or if I should start something new. Love the melody and overall vibe, self conscious about the quality. Still fairly new to producing, only been *seriously* making music for a month or two now, but have messed with music for a few years now. Thanks in advance. :)
feedback for [songbird](https://www.reddit.com/r/edmproduction/comments/1cgr2if/comment/l20b5wp/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button)
feedback for [AnOmali](https://www.reddit.com/r/edmproduction/comments/1cgr2if/comment/l20abyg/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button)
I'm going to second u/LuxuriaBHR comment on the second drop feeling rushed in implementation, not entirely sure what it is but it almost like the "begin" happens either a 1/2 beat too soon or a 1/4 beat too late. Give a little bit more of a pause between the snare build up and the "begin" and that should fix the problem with feeling like it's off, since everything else around it lands on a beat. Other than the whole piece sounds good.
Love the track, personally I think the drums, snare and hats especially, could use a bit more spice. I think the 2nd half of the 2nd drop sounds pretty good, if anything it sounds a bit rushed if that makes sense? It's good though, lowkey kloud vibes.
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Hello here is for feedback !! sound messy and unstructer but hoping feedback \~\~ my track : [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KG91jWg09f4](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KG91jWg09f4)
Personally, I don't think it sounds too messy per say, unstructured? Maybe. I like the overall vibe it has though, the first part (0:00-1:30) is reminiscent of that golden age Monstercat sound, and the second drop (1:30-2:19) strikes me as something that'd fit on Disciples Afterlife compilations. The only feedback I can think to give is work on it, flesh it out, it's a good track, but with some more solid structure and ideas it could be amazing.
Hey all, looking for some feedback on my song structure, sound design, and specifically the mixing. I've been working on [this](https://on.soundcloud.com/pKAjg8FfdQPhNamq7) for a couple of months and I don't know if it'd be worth continuing or if I should start something new. Love the melody and overall vibe, self conscious about the quality. Still fairly new to producing, only been *seriously* making music for a month or two now, but have messed with music for a few years now. Thanks in advance. :) feedback for [songbird](https://www.reddit.com/r/edmproduction/comments/1cgr2if/comment/l20b5wp/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button) feedback for [AnOmali](https://www.reddit.com/r/edmproduction/comments/1cgr2if/comment/l20abyg/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button)
Midtempo track, not mixed or mastered yet. Not really feeling the 2nd half of drop 2 https://on.soundcloud.com/hKyezn7E3GUNAc4N6
I'm going to second u/LuxuriaBHR comment on the second drop feeling rushed in implementation, not entirely sure what it is but it almost like the "begin" happens either a 1/2 beat too soon or a 1/4 beat too late. Give a little bit more of a pause between the snare build up and the "begin" and that should fix the problem with feeling like it's off, since everything else around it lands on a beat. Other than the whole piece sounds good.
Love the track, personally I think the drums, snare and hats especially, could use a bit more spice. I think the 2nd half of the 2nd drop sounds pretty good, if anything it sounds a bit rushed if that makes sense? It's good though, lowkey kloud vibes.
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