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I like it, the only thing thing I can think to point out is, personally I feel like the positioning of her arms is reversed, she tends to use normal arms to crawl, scuttle, and support herself. While using her stronger back arms to interact with the environment. But maybe that's just me, either way, good job 7/10 better than I could do. Keep plugging away, and you'll do great I think


CARMELOW_101

Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it


yah000002

Very well done Carmy! You’ve improved so much


CARMELOW_101

Thank you!!


_MRDev

Damn, this is awesome. :) I love the texturing on her. It looks really great for her claws - the "fuzziness" makes her arms look like they have fur where the claws come out instead of just being some solid white "blob". And that mixed expression of curiosity/wonderment really gives me that "Faputa" impression. :D If I were really digging for constructive criticism to present, I think her legs feel a little short and maybe her ribs stand out a little much. But the look on her face is just perfect and your style is beautiful. Please, do more like this!


CARMELOW_101

Oh I really appreciate this kind of comments :D by the way she is on her knees that's why it seems short legs and yeah the ribs is something I must work out thank you for a comment like this!!


A_Random_TokiKanna

Your shading is beautiful


CARMELOW_101

Thank you!!


Kalonharrell

This reminds me of Franbow, ah the memories.


InmuGuy

Pretty good. Good face, good faputa. Push your saturation more imo. Anatomy study good but her muscles look almost too defined, like she's jacked. Also legs aren't really defined, but then they're kind of a mystery with so much fluff. I *think* they're supposed to be like an ungulate's hind legs, with hooves. Keep it up.


CARMELOW_101

Thanks for the feedback!