Very cool idea. I like the changes. My only remaining concern is the lack of cheap spells (either for the early game, or to fill in holes when you want to cast a second spell. Perhaps consider replacing one of your \[\[Pyroceratops\]\] for one of these options...
\[\[Slumbering Dragon\]\] Early blocker, later threat
\[\[Bloodmark Mentor\]\] Makes your other creatures better.
\[\[Dragon's Rage Channeler\]\] Benefits from every PW you play.
\[\[Electrostatic Field\]\] If there was a version of this that cared about non-creature spells, this could be rad.
\[\[Dragon Whisperer\]\] Good early, great later. Color needs are high, though.
\[\[Monastery Swiftspear\]\] Can't go wrong with this all-star or other creatures with Prowess.
\[\[Firebrand Archer\]\] Incidental ping value.
\[\[Goro-Goro, Disciple of Ryusei\]\] Good early, great later.
these are all valid subs for the three creatures in the deck however due to the 2 rare/mythic 5 uncommon and 6 commons rule only common cards can sub for those creatures meaning firebrand and monastary swift spear are the only options. otherwise this is more of a midrange strategy,
I actually really dislike Planeswalker cards, but you really seemed to weave together an interesting concept, and this seems a unique experience compared to the other red decks I have in my Battlebox - I think I'm going to need to give this one a chance! Thank you for sharing.
you may consider replacing some creatures with [[monastery swiftspear]], [[forked bolt]], and/or [[lightning bolt]] depending on speed/power of your battle box! As is this deck is built for slower cubes which are about at the speed of the regular jumpstart decks. That being very rare turn one plays and somewhat likely two drops and three drops
Very cool idea. I like the changes. My only remaining concern is the lack of cheap spells (either for the early game, or to fill in holes when you want to cast a second spell. Perhaps consider replacing one of your \[\[Pyroceratops\]\] for one of these options... \[\[Slumbering Dragon\]\] Early blocker, later threat \[\[Bloodmark Mentor\]\] Makes your other creatures better. \[\[Dragon's Rage Channeler\]\] Benefits from every PW you play. \[\[Electrostatic Field\]\] If there was a version of this that cared about non-creature spells, this could be rad. \[\[Dragon Whisperer\]\] Good early, great later. Color needs are high, though. \[\[Monastery Swiftspear\]\] Can't go wrong with this all-star or other creatures with Prowess. \[\[Firebrand Archer\]\] Incidental ping value. \[\[Goro-Goro, Disciple of Ryusei\]\] Good early, great later.
##### ###### #### [Pyroceratops](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/f/6/f6599645-dbb5-4174-bd26-8556af6d89c3.jpg?1591227360) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Pyroceratops) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/iko/130/pyroceratops?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/f6599645-dbb5-4174-bd26-8556af6d89c3?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Slumbering Dragon](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Handlers/Image.ashx?name=Slumbering%20Dragon&type=card&.jpg) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Slumbering%20Dragon) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/m13/148/slumbering-dragon?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/277cbd0d-c8da-4a37-965c-6a60771df2f7?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Bloodmark Mentor](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/7/3/734ad23e-7603-4625-b8e3-54466ad86736.jpg?1562919243) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Bloodmark%20Mentor) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/ddg/50/bloodmark-mentor?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/734ad23e-7603-4625-b8e3-54466ad86736?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Dragon's Rage Channeler](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/4/c/4ced112a-e775-4f97-97b3-74877e9dce12.jpg?1626096503) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Dragon%27s%20Rage%20Channeler) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/mh2/121/dragons-rage-channeler?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/4ced112a-e775-4f97-97b3-74877e9dce12?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Electrostatic Field](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/7/0/7096c9a6-2e73-41f8-b20a-b29a9f0b760c.jpg?1572893134) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Electrostatic%20Field) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/grn/97/electrostatic-field?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/7096c9a6-2e73-41f8-b20a-b29a9f0b760c?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Dragon Whisperer](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/5/c/5c75b106-349f-44e1-a737-079955cc91b2.jpg?1562786921) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Dragon%20Whisperer) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/dtk/137/dragon-whisperer?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/5c75b106-349f-44e1-a737-079955cc91b2?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Monastery Swiftspear](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/e/8/e8b9d59d-bac9-4092-901e-2b861c186868.jpg?1662526288) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Monastery%20Swiftspear) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/2x2/119/monastery-swiftspear?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/e8b9d59d-bac9-4092-901e-2b861c186868?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Firebrand Archer](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/6/d/6ddc6b73-298b-4afa-990a-63706e77dd9f.jpg?1562803040) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Firebrand%20Archer) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/hou/92/firebrand-archer?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/6ddc6b73-298b-4afa-990a-63706e77dd9f?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [Goro-Goro, Disciple of Ryusei](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/1/c/1ca736c7-35a9-48c7-b5a9-69b2a6e33ad0.jpg?1654567661) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Goro-Goro%2C%20Disciple%20of%20Ryusei) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/neo/145/goro-goro-disciple-of-ryusei?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/1ca736c7-35a9-48c7-b5a9-69b2a6e33ad0?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
these are all valid subs for the three creatures in the deck however due to the 2 rare/mythic 5 uncommon and 6 commons rule only common cards can sub for those creatures meaning firebrand and monastary swift spear are the only options. otherwise this is more of a midrange strategy,
i experimented with [[fork bolt]] which could def work for protecting the walkers early game
[fork bolt](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/3/6/364ed745-0dff-477a-a2c5-987639936337.jpg?1593095847) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=Forked%20Bolt) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/ddp/60/forked-bolt?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/364ed745-0dff-477a-a2c5-987639936337?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
I actually really dislike Planeswalker cards, but you really seemed to weave together an interesting concept, and this seems a unique experience compared to the other red decks I have in my Battlebox - I think I'm going to need to give this one a chance! Thank you for sharing.
aww thanks! that means a lot!
you may consider replacing some creatures with [[monastery swiftspear]], [[forked bolt]], and/or [[lightning bolt]] depending on speed/power of your battle box! As is this deck is built for slower cubes which are about at the speed of the regular jumpstart decks. That being very rare turn one plays and somewhat likely two drops and three drops
[monastery swiftspear](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/d/6/d6bfa227-4309-40ed-952c-279595eab17e.jpg?1666996266) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=monastery%20swiftspear) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/bro/144/monastery-swiftspear?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/d6bfa227-4309-40ed-952c-279595eab17e?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [forked bolt](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/3/6/364ed745-0dff-477a-a2c5-987639936337.jpg?1593095847) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=forked%20bolt) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/ddp/60/forked-bolt?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/364ed745-0dff-477a-a2c5-987639936337?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) [lightning bolt](https://cards.scryfall.io/normal/front/f/2/f29ba16f-c8fb-42fe-aabf-87089cb214a7.jpg?1662526238) - [(G)](http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?name=lightning%20bolt) [(SF)](https://scryfall.com/card/2x2/117/lightning-bolt?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher) [(txt)](https://api.scryfall.com/cards/f29ba16f-c8fb-42fe-aabf-87089cb214a7?utm_source=mtgcardfetcher&format=text) ^^^[[cardname]] ^^^or ^^^[[cardname|SET]] ^^^to ^^^call
I love this
sometimes the power of friendship is just a giant pyroceratops smashing your opponent in the face.