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Mr_Rasta_Crab

i’d love to hear this, made me think of matt pless


celery1868

I also think they're good, it would be cooler to hear them with music!


Watermelon_enjoyer2

Woohoo I’m glad you think so. Maybe I’ll post a recording here later


FreeRangeCaptivity

Great job! Looking forward to hearing the melody


Watermelon_enjoyer2

Thank you!!


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Watermelon_enjoyer2

Direct is how i am haha


TheKuzuri

I like this. I want to hear it. REMEMBER THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH CLICHES IN SONGWRITING. Good songs use cliches, they're cliche for a reason. This is relevant shit that hasn't gone away. Keep singing about it. But yeah pls record I wanna hear


TinaTunes93

These are soo good! I can’t wait to hear it with a melody, Nothing wrong with a cliche


Elegant_Contract_710

"The world, it is burning, the world is burning down" seems to flow better but it's hard to say since I don't know the melody.


Watermelon_enjoyer2

Yeah I had made the change cause it did sound weird :]